my thoughts are incoherentsymbols of the soul
i revise
and edit my message
a hundred times.
it shouldn't sound like i'm pining.
i'd be as casual as you are.
how goes it?; hope you're ok are perfect;
think first about take care.
and if you don't reply, it won't bother me
but if you do
i won't expect too much of it.
i'll remember to cut the thread short
to avoid spoiling the moment
i'll stop myself from being too happy when i receive it.
i'll read this poem to remind myself
that sometimes you go through the tunnel
even when there's no light at the end of it,
love is not won but given
but it's not enough
reason
to keep one from yearning.
i revise
and edit my message
a hundred times.
it shouldn't sound like i'm pining.
i'd be as casual as you are.
how goes it?; hope you're ok are perfect;
think first about take care.
and if you don't reply, it won't bother me
but if you do
i won't expect too much of it.
i'll remember to cut the thread short
to avoid spoiling the moment
i'll stop myself from being too happy when i receive it.
i'll read this poem to remind myself
that sometimes you go through the tunnel
even when there's no light at the end of it,
love is not won but given
but it's not enough
reason
to keep one from yearning.
2 comments:
Wow, I can say that ur very poetic and u really had a good background in english grammar., I hope me too coz Im not good & I've also seen ur account in zaad. Hope you and the rest of zaadster will inspire more people. Gudluck.
saan tong picture na to?
and, ngayon ko lang napansin to: "comments are moderated, give one-day leadtime before you can see them :P" HAHAHHAA. Is that message for me?
anyway, good luck with love. when it finally comes, you'll be glad you waited. :)
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